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The author bio (biography) introduces you, the author. It is commonly seen inside the back of a book, on websites, social media, Amazon pages, etc. It supplements the blurb, which introduces the story premise, and is normally seen first.

A good author bio is an opportunity to make people think, Wow, I’m interested in this person, I want to read what they have to say. I personally have bought books for this reason alone.

However, some authors have no bio. Others are bland to the point of camouflage, acting as a shield rather than illuminating the personality that created the book. Some resort to listing authors’ pet animals. Unless the story features pets, this is a wasted opportunity.

Don’t waste this chance. Utilise your bio, and enthuse potential readers.

Here’s how to write one.

Conventions

Author bios are usually short, written in third person, with name, geographical location, and website/contact details. The rest of the bio is up to you.

The third person

Your author bio is in third person. It is not about your fluffy pet-loving domestic self: it is about your professional persona.

Writing in third person can be helpful: it’s someone apart, as you would write a character.

Are you using a pen name, or your own name? Whichever, it’s your public face. What do you want to show?

There’s usually a photograph. If you’re using a pen name, consider hiring an artist to create a portrait.

Length

Author bios on Amazon, or on/inside your book, are normally short – aim at around 100 words. People browsing for books rarely linger: entrance readers from your first sentence. You can then create an extended version for your own website or anywhere else that requires a more in-depth bio.

Geographical location

At the minimum, readers like to know in which continent their author resides. It’s also valuable information, so choose carefully how to describe it. How does it relate to your work?

For instance, do you live in a National Park, a sweeping landscape of glacier-scoured rocks, your setting for epic sagas? Or are you in Leeds, UK, where inside knowledge of post-industrial decline fuels a gritty thriller?

If you have concerns about privacy, be less specific, while still evoking setting. Perhaps you live in the English countryside, where simple village life inspires cosy romances?

You might feel your location is irrelevant. If so, consider what might make it so. If you live in London, but write about Ancient Mesopotamia, perhaps London provides opportunities to view inspirational museum artefacts?

If you live in the middle of nowhere, perhaps it frees you from distractions, in order to imagine deeply into your story world?

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The intriguing stuff: what makes you, and your book, unique?

Authority

What is your authority to write this book? If you’re writing non-fiction, it’s easy. You have education, or a career, that provides expertise on the subject.

Fiction writers have authority, too. Creativity and imagination rarely come from nowhere. Travel, work experience, life experience, a city or a landscape, wildlife, history? Even chance encounters feed the deep thinking that ignites a novel.

Historical fiction writers, of course, bridge the two. The genre demands a subtle combination of both research and creative imagination.

Therefore, consider both. What research did you do? Does any of your own experience feed into the book? Do you have expertise that translates into your story? Many writers have previous – or concurrent – careers. Maybe you were inspired to re-imagine how people in your line of business worked in a previous era? This is your chance to share that insider knowledge, and inspire your readers.

Or maybe, simply a chance visit, sight, or encounter, sparked a research journey that culminated in your story? Tell us about it.

Life experience

Authority comes from facts. Life experience is about emotional insights that inspire and underpin a story. What such experience is relevant – nay, essential – to your book?

Emotional experience is both unique, and universal. It speaks to people.

Your wisdom – often hard won – might come from memories of growing up, or from family history. You might have overcome a personal crisis or challenge.

Your characters may not necessarily experience the same challenges as you. But, translated through the lens of fiction, the emotional experience resonates.

For instance, what if an author has life experience in corporate finance? At first sight, it may seem to bear little relevance to historical fiction about, say, Mediaeval barons. But think again. Years of working up the corporate ladder, dealing, trade-offs, metaphorical back-stabbing, the need to be seen with the right people, at the right time. How does this compare with Medieval politics? What are the similarities between corporate life, and the baron, who must manage his wealth, servants, tenants, and keep on the right side the king? After consideration, perhaps the emotions of corporate life are not so far removed from those of feudal politics? Might those parallels intrigue readers?

Tone

Your book has its own tone: hard-hitting, humorous, heart-warming, maybe even whimsical. Reflect this in your author bio. If you’re writing cosy historical romance, perhaps, tongue literally in cheek, you must extensively research the role of teashops in Edwardian courtship? If you engaged in serious research, did you get a thrill from a special viewing of artefacts not normally available to the public? If your story is mystical, did you experience an illuminating vision?

It’s worth studying other author bios. Ben Kane’s is a pithy masterpiece, uniting geography, inspiration and his own backstory, in one sentence.  Elizabeth Chadwick generates warmth with her husband’s credit as ‘research assistant’ for the love scenes.

Whatever the mood, bring it to life, and illuminate the personality behind the book.

Validation

Does anything else endorse your work? Won any prizes? A positive review? A celebrity endorsement? Previously published works? Are you a member of relevant society? A relevant previous career?

Give them more

Tell readers what you’re working on now. A sequel returning a loved character? An exciting new inspiration? Enthuse them for the next thing. Remember to add your website and social media.

Edit and revise

Having considered your bio, you likely have too much information. Therefore, edit to focus on points most likely to engage readers. Your book is unique. You are the unique personality that created it. Let that personality shine.

Helen Johnson is a guest contributor to The History Quill. She has spent a quarter of a century writing about Yorkshire’s people, places, culture and heritage. What she learned inspired her to bring Yorkshire’s past to life through historical fiction. She is currently working on a novel set during William the Conqueror’s genocide. Helen also publishes articles, reviews and short stories. She is a beta reader for The History Quill, a reviewer for the Historical Novel Society, and leads workshops for Promoting Yorkshire Authors. Visit Helen’s website for more information.

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A cover is a door: invite your readers in https://thehistoryquill.com/a-cover-is-a-door-invite-your-reader-in/ Wed, 26 Mar 2025 12:25:19 +0000 https://thehistoryquill.com/?p=76081 The post A cover is a door: invite your readers in appeared first on The History Quill.

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You’ve finished writing your novel and are excited to share it with readers, but before you look for reviews, bloggers, podcasts, or book clubs to get the word out, take time to consider your cover. A great design will entice readers to click on it or pick it up whether the book sits on a shelf or is displayed on a website.

I’d like to suggest you think about your book as an invitation to a wonderful shared meal. The cover serves as a door to the party, giving readers a feeling about what they’ll find inside—a formal do with candles and aperitifs, a raucous music-filled soiree, or a casual back-yard barbecue.

As to the actual design, preparation can make your vision concrete. For those self-publishing, that vision will guide you or your designer; for those with a traditional publisher, you will have less control. However, it can’t hurt to communicate with the design team about the cover of your dreams.

Before we look at six aspects of your cover, a small assignment to focus your thoughts. Jot down five adjectives that describe your book and tape them on the wall where you can see them. Then give yourself a new mantra: three seconds. That is the amount of time readers scanning for a new book spend on each cover. Three seconds to catch an eye, to be memorable.

Image

While you were writing, you may have imagined your main character on the cover, a historical figure perhaps, or a woman comforting a child or a suave man in a tuxedo. Or perhaps you pictured an important object like a queen’s seal or a bent fork.

First ideas can be the best, but before deciding, take some time to explore.

In your browser, search for books like yours, i.e. “Renaissance novels” or “Historical Romance.” Copy the covers you love and paste them into a document. Now scan the display, asking yourself these questions.

Does a visual theme stand out? For historical fiction, the figure of a woman in period dress facing away into the book’s location has been popular. The popularity indicates that it sells, so you may want to join the crowd. Or you may choose a different path. Either can be right. One note: if you search online for a perfect image, keep in mind the copyright. A little care can save you heartache.

Do you like faces or objects? Abstract images or reality? Allusive or direct? There’s no right or wrong, just a sense of what makes visible your story.

Note, it’s perhaps best to avoid AI generated images. Many readers sense them and will find them inauthentic.

Write down your answers, then compare them to your list of adjectives.

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Color

You need to repeat the same drill as above, but first consciously open your mind to a color you wouldn’t put on your wall or wear. Orange. Olive. Puce. Now return to your display, scanning the covers. Remember: two seconds a book. What draws your eye? What stands out? You hate yellow but there it is, bold and calling to the reader. Or your favorite blue, moody and strong.

Now go a step further. The next time you’re in a bookstore (that’s often, right?), take a look at the spines. Are they all black? Hard to read? Because chances are your book will be shelved at some point, spine out. Don’t lose your advantage.

Choose two colors, write them down, and compare them to your adjectives.

Font

Back to your display. Focus on the font, imagining your title, your name! So many choices – script, blocky, angular, graceful. You’ll want a strong color contrast between image and text. A font that is easy to read in a thumbnail. And of course, it should suggest what’s inside.

Match the various looks to your adjectives. If you don’t see any fonts that suit, repeat the exercise, adding books to your list.

Movement

Your story isn’t static. There’s tension, the characters change, events propel the plot forward. So the cover should likewise move.

If your chosen image has inherent motion—a dancing flapper, a warrior with a sword—lucky you. If it’s a face, tension can be inserted by pushing the face close, partially screening features, or angling and cropping the image. A swipe of unusual color can also add tension, as can the placement of the title.

You may want to add a couple of cover examples to your page to express this.

Size

This is just a heads up. Your final design should be in high resolution for crispness, and size flexible. Imagine websites, bookmarks, ads, Amazon’s thumbnail.

Instagram’s sizing can be difficult, and if you want an audible book, those designs are square. Being aware can save later difficulties.

Back

Last but not least, don’t forget the back cover where your potential reader gets a taste of the party meal inside.

Make it delicious. Easy to digest. In other words succinct and colorful. Start with your best elevator speech—a descriptive couple of sentences you’d use to hook a reader in a brief encounter between floors.

Add praise and/or reviews. Despite the recent decision by Simon and Schuster to forego blurbs, they can be helpful if well chosen.

Finally, spice up all the verbiage with a couple of small images that reflect the front. A tuxedo tie; a graceful silhouette.

Your time has been well spent; you now have a list of adjectives, sample book covers, image types, colors, fonts, and verbiage to give your designer. Or to use yourself. These are merely guidelines. Let creativity flow.

Wishing you excellent sales.

Terri Lewis fell in love with medieval history in college. Not the dates or wars, but the mysterious daily lives. She studied & visited Europe’s old towns and castles. Finally, two sentences in a book bought at Windsor Castle led her to write Behold the Bird in Flight, A Novel of an Abducted Queen, the story of Isabelle d’Angoulême, King John’s 2nd wife. Available for pre-order at Simon and Schuster. (Check out her cover there.) She lives in Denver, Colorado. Come say hi at TerriLewis1.com

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Biographical fiction: the pleasure and pain of writing about real lives https://thehistoryquill.com/biographical-fiction-the-pleasure-and-pain-of-writing-about-real-lives/ Fri, 28 Feb 2025 15:04:25 +0000 https://thehistoryquill.com/?p=77020 The post Biographical fiction: the pleasure and pain of writing about real lives appeared first on The History Quill.

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All historical novels, perhaps all novels, blur the edges of fact and fiction. Our characters inhabit places and periods defined by known geography and history, sometimes in very specific ways (say mediaeval York, or the reign of a particular monarch). But why do so many fiction-writers (including some very big names; Mantel, Chevalier, Harris) choose to create a novel out of an existing life story?

Mostly I think because we see something in that story that hasn’t been told before, something to explore, to uncover or to celebrate. Maybe you have some personal connection to the subject or are party to something that other people don’t know, or you glimpse an unsung character on the fringes of that life who may have exerted unknown power or influence. At any rate, once that subject has caught your eye, you want to bring this story not to readers of biography or history, but to your particular audience, fans of historical fiction.

Pleasure

So, you have your inspiration and you’re off to a flying start. I can predict, for fairly obvious reasons, that the first few chapters, maybe the first draft, will be plain sailing:

  • This is a ‘found story’ with characters, settings and plot ready-made.
  • Research is a joy: there may well be extensive primary sources to mine, maybe even surviving eyewitnesses to contact, as well as published biographies and other research, all directly relevant.
  • Even if your subject is more obscure (with extra freedom to be creative!) there will almost certainly be some group of enthusiasts you can join. Instead of toiling alone, you’re suddenly part of a family who share your obsession (something I’ve written about here).
  • Our research contacts form the backbone of our intended audience. We may have a readymade readership that could be huge and possibly international. Publishers are likely to take note.

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Pain

Almost as soon as you fire up the keyboard, you step into the hornet’s nest of daring to write fiction ‘based on’ fact. Worries of this kind occur at every level:

  • Very few life stories are tailormade for fiction. You know your subject is worthy of a novel, but what if that narrative arc fails to emerge? What is this story exactly, and how much freedom can you exercise to produce a satisfying reader experience without compromising ‘history’?
  • On a smaller scale, your ongoing research (once you have started how can you ever give up?) may throw up the unexpected; dates, places, events are not as you thought. Do you ignore these googlies or redraft to stay true to the facts?
  • In the end, when our book is published, that interested audience may withdraw their support, leaving historical experts, fellow fans or even surviving relatives lining up to challenge your account.

Suddenly this biographical project doesn’t feel like such a good idea!

Sensible precautions

If you still want to do this, what steps can you take to avoid disaster? First of all, I would recommend you choose your subject(s) carefully. I personally would avoid those with close relatives still around, unless they have sanctioned the project or you are very confident of your sources.

I would go so far as to say, be mindful of people’s feelings. In a note to his literary successors, Robert Louis Stevenson said , ‘it is never worthwhile to inflict pain upon a snail for any literary purpose.’ Readers might justifiably take your version as fact. Imagine if your book were the new The Crown. Would it inflict any pain? Could you justify it?

The closer we come to the present day, the more likely we are to offend, and in the case of recent history or current affairs, it’s common to differentiate between people who lived in the public spotlight (fair game for exposing or debunking?) and those who’ve lived more private lives, but while this could hold good for more distant history, let’s not forget that historical figures, famous or obscure, aren’t around to defend themselves. You’ll have to decide on the ethics of putting someone in the spotlight, for better or for worse.

Here are some more practical tips:

  • Be transparent! Historical notes are your friends. Here you explain the history and where you have deviated from it. I was impressed by a recent read which put all of this at the front of the book rather than the back, giving transparency from the outset (assuming you can do this without spoilers!)
  • Create a diversion! Suppose everything is just too complicated and worrying, or the story doesn’t quite work? Would it be better to change the character names and abandon your biographical intention for something that tells the same story without referencing your real hero/heroine directly? An excellent example of this is Tom Crewe’s The New Life, where character names are changed only slightly to allow creative freedom.

A balancing act

What must take precedence, fiction or fact? One historical novelist I quizzed was categorical on this point. Story is king, don’t let history get in the way. (She is not, by the way, engaged in biographical fiction.) But with the writer’s power, surely there comes responsibility. I’ve learned most of what I know about Thomas Cromwell, Elvis Presley and Chernobyl, from books, biopics and screen dramatizations. I’d like to think the writers, while employing some artistic licence, are presenting a picture I can trust.

On the other hand, I have read biographical novels that feel clunky because too much history shows through. By pleasing the cognoscenti you may end up losing sight of your story, and a story is what readers of fiction want.

It comes down, I suppose, (and this applies to all of historical fiction) to the scale and significance of the changes made. I don’t think anyone objects in principle to our playing with might-have-beens, the detail of scenes and conversations which history has failed to relay to us. Changing a verifiable date or the known outcome of a major event, on the other hand, would feel wrong, unless of course we’re writing alternate history (in which case see above re transparency!)

Of course, between these two easily definable extremes, there will be grey areas. I confess to the odd sin of omission in ignoring an inconvenient character (usually minor). I might even use some elasticity in the timing of known meetings, journeys or conversations to improve the narrative flow. I have definitely inserted fictional characters into my historical cast. So, yes, I have written things I know did not take place. But I would argue only little things, and nothing that I think would bother Mr Stevenson’s snail.

Whose story is it anyway?

Here’s an anecdote which I hope illustrates a point. Over a year after publication of In the Blink of an Eye, I was alerted by a friend and expert to something in the life of my hero that neither of us had been aware of up to that point.

This wasn’t a matter of world history, but something that had I known about it, would probably have changed the ending of my novel if not its entire shape. I had got things wrong. I had unwittingly disrespected my subject.

But on reflection I put aside my vexation. In writing fiction we don’t just recreate characters, we create new ones. There are as many Henry VIIIs or Winston Churchills as we see on the page or the screen. My hero from nineteenth century Edinburgh has gained another life in the pages of my novel.

If I were to reissue the book, I might add a note, but I wouldn’t change it. This is ‘my’ D. O. Hill, this is my story now.

Stick or twist?

If you’re planning a biographical historical novel, I would say think carefully before you start. If too many problems arise, don’t be afraid to step away, and if you decide to subvert history, have a compelling reason and come clean about it.

But once you’ve committed to this fascinating and challenging task, enjoy the ride, it’s sure to be fun. And there is a lot of satisfaction to be derived from amassing knowledge. Just think, if you don’t write a best-seller, you’re ready to take Mastermind by storm!

Ali Bacon is a native Scot living in the South West of England whose writing is strongly influenced by her Scottish roots. Following a first contemporary novel, she has spent time with a nineteenth century photographer (In the Blink of an Eye, Linen Press, 2018) and a medieval nun (Within these Walls, Bristol Short Story Local Author Prize 2019). Her latest novel The Absent Heart, inspired by the letters of R. L. Stevenson, will be published by Linen Press in March 2025. You can sign up for Ali’s monthly newsletter Beyond the Book at https://alibacon.com or chat on Instagram @alibwriter or Bluesky alibacon.bsky.social

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Publishing models: out with the old, in with the older? https://thehistoryquill.com/publishing-models/ Tue, 28 Jan 2025 13:40:29 +0000 https://thehistoryquill.com/?p=72165 The post Publishing models: out with the old, in with the older? appeared first on The History Quill.

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One of the hardest parts of being a writer of historical fiction (after writing the book, obviously) is deciding how to get your work in front of your readers.

For most, there will be the pull of traditional publishing; of having your work accepted by a storied agent who submits it to legendary editors, of cover designs and copy edits, pub dates and advances.

Yet while there is still a certain cachet in having your work accepted for publication by a traditional publisher, other models might suit individual writers better.

The most obvious alternatives are self and hybrid publishing, where more of the non-writing work – the editing, marketing, sales, publicity and distribution – is the sole responsibility of the author.

Self-publishing in particular is often considered a relatively new phenomenon, but it’s actually been around for longer than most people realise. Mark Twain famously self-published The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn when he wasn’t happy with the profit margins he was getting from his publisher.

But it is also fair to say that these approaches have enjoyed a shot in the army thanks to the advent of technology. Ebooks and their associated marketplaces have made it much easier for anyone to turn a manuscript into a finished book and get it out into the world.

What’s often overlooked, however, is how other forms of distribution are enjoying a resurgence thanks to technology.

Subscriptions, memberships and crowdfunding are all offering alternative routes for writers. And while all are much easier to set up and launch nowadays, they too are much older than many people think.

Following Dickens and Dumas into serials

Take serialised subscriptions. Charles Dickens and Alexandre Dumas both began their careers with serialised novels.

But whereas they did so because there was demand from periodicals and newspapers, nowadays writers have platforms like Substack. They might have started as newsletter services, but for more and more writers, one of the main reasons to publish via these platforms is the built-in subscription services. Authors such as Holly Brown and Sue Meredith Mann offer subscribers their novels in serial form, with new instalments available regularly.

If the subscriptions are paid, writers get a regular income that could end up being more per reader than if they had sold physical copies of their books.

Even free options have benefits to writers, particularly when it comes to building audiences. Providing free subscribers with introductory chapters can help gather interest and get people excited before they take the plunge into paid offerings.

Serialising a story to subscribers can also be a way of helping shape the story. As Mann notes in her about section, her “beta readers love the book – but they all know me in some capacity. Does the book have merit in its own right, just as a story?” Building a subscriber base on a platform such as Substack and beehiv can help generate feedback, whether it’s direct – such as receiving reader comments – or through metrics such as engagement with that chapter.

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The new (old) patronage system

Membership platforms like Patreon and Ko-Fi provide similar opportunities for writers to offer readers different levels of access. Where they tend to differ from the subscription services is that there is usually a greater emphasis on supporting a writer’s work. So payment may not just be for the book, but as part of a demonstration of appreciation. It’s a bit like the old patronage system that William Shakespeare, among others, benefited from, the main difference being that today it’s the average consumer that’s the patron, rather than a wealthy benefactor.

There is also a greater focus on writers providing readers with additional content and benefits. For example, graphic novelist Paul Guinan runs a Patreon for his work about the fall of the Aztec Empire. He offers six paid membership tiers, each with different benefits, such as dedications, likeness as a character or original sketches.

Membership approaches also cultivate fan bases, attracting those who want to invest in the writer and the stories they tell; not just buying the books, but joining an exclusive club. Historical fantasy author Lucy Holland uses Patreon to offer research notes and other content to deepen her readers’ relationship with her work.

Testing the waters with crowdfunding

Then there’s crowdfunding. High fantasy and science fiction author Brandon Sanderson broke records when his crowdfunding for four novels made more than $45 million across Kickstarter and BackerKit in 2022. He also used it to fund a special limited edition of another of his novels.

As with memberships, pledging different amounts gives readers access to various rewards, whether bundles of books, signed editions or being included in the work (one project promised to make backers of its highest tier guests at a character’s wedding).

One of the major benefits of crowdfunding is that it helps to gauge interest in the story being offered. While a lot goes into a successful crowdfunding campaign beyond a great story, it does give writers a sense of what their readers are willing to pay for.

Combining multiple models

It’s a benefit that’s at the core of Unbound’s business model. While submissions have to go through a selection process similar to that of a traditional publisher, whether the book is published or not ultimately comes down to whether it receives enough backing. Assuming it does, authors then have the support of the company’s editors, sales and marketing teams to get their work fit for public consumption. Everyone involved already knows that there is a level of interest in the work that can be built upon, reducing the risk for all involved. Solange Burrell, Katharine Quarmby and Alex de Campi have all published historical fiction in this way, often covering topics and eras that might not fit with traditional publishing’s trends.

And that’s a key point to remember when considering which model to adopt. Historical fiction, like any genre, has certain areas that are considered more commercially viable than others. In the UK, for instance, there’s the Romans, the Tudors and the World Wars, then possibly the Vikings, the Middle Ages, and certain parts of the 18th and 19th centuries, such as the Regency.

It’s a commercial reality that traditional publishers (particularly the bigger ones) have to consider whether a book has a market. Debating whether that should be the case is a matter for a different article, but what it does mean is that certain periods don’t get the same level of attention as others. Adopting non-traditional models could be a way of getting your novel on a love story set in pre-Roman Britain to its readership.

A publishing model for all

There’s one other point to make: this is not an either-or choice. If you choose the traditional approach for one work, there’s nothing (aside from perhaps any legal restrictions depending on your publishing contract) stopping you from using another model for later books.
Some models complement each other well, and can even be used to boost each other. Michael Jecks has published more than fifty books with traditional publishers and also runs a Patreon to engage with readers in more depth.

Ultimately, it’s about reaching readers. Whether they’re picking up your latest hardback in Waterstones, receiving a new chapter via email, or pledging to crowdfund a signed leather-bound limited edition, what matters is that they read your words.

Josh Turner is a guest contributor to The History Quill. A freelance writer based in the UK, Josh is currently working on a series set in late 18th-century America.

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How to get started writing alternate historical fiction https://thehistoryquill.com/how-to-get-started-writing-alternate-historical-fiction/ Thu, 19 Dec 2024 07:00:00 +0000 https://thehistoryquill.com/?p=69628 The post How to get started writing alternate historical fiction appeared first on The History Quill.

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One of the great joys of being a writer is getting to play “What if”. Historical fiction in particular allows you to imagine the unseen scenarios that led to major historical events. We can create characters and circumstances that reveal the true story (or at least our interpretation of it), encouraging readers to think about these events in a different way. Alternate history takes this approach a step further and lets us imagine what history would look like if things had turned out differently. What if Shakespeare had been a woman? What if the world was ruled by cats? What if the Titanic never sunk, or Laura Secord never stopped the American invasion of Canada, or Hitler faked his own death? The only limit is our imagination. Alternate history is the chance to rewrite the world in our own design. Read on for everything you need to know about this rising star of speculative fiction.

What is alternate history fiction?

Alternate history is a subgenre of speculative fiction that explores a reality in which a moment of history was different from one in the reality we know. It can take place at any point in history between the altered moment and the present day, exploring the ramifications of this change and how those ramifications echo across time. One of the most famous alternate history novels is Philip K Dick’s The Man in the High Castle. This novel, written in 1962, explores what would have happened if the allies — France, Great Britain, America, et al. — lost World War II. By creating this potential reality, the author opens some big questions and communicates themes of power, culture, and free will. Other alternate history novels include:
  • Dread Nation by Justina Ireland
  • The Underground Railroad by Colson Whitehead
  • The Peshawar Lancers by S.M. Stirling
  • Farthing by Jo Walton
  • The Plot Against America by Philip Roth
  • Fatherland by Robert Harris
  • Cahokia Jazz by Francis Spufford

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How to write your own alternate history novel

Ready to launch into an alternate history adventure of your own? Let’s dive in.

Choose your historical catalyst

In every alternate history novel, there will be a moment in time that diverges from the one we know. You can think of it like a railroad track that splits off into two different directions. Our two worlds followed the same path until one pivotal instant in their journeys.

The more specific you can be, the better. Something like “What if Nazis won World War II” has a lot of moving parts. Instead, consider what would have happened if a boat filled with allied soldiers on their way to battle had sprung a leak and sunk, or what would have happened if a referendum vote went a different way. What butterfly effect would reverberate from this moment?

For example, Dominion by C.J Sansom uses a political election as its catalyst. In this story, Lord Halifax becomes the British prime minister in 1940 instead of Winston Churchill. One simple change creates an entirely different outcome.

History is filled with unsung heroes — and villains. Alternate history is an opportunity to explore how one person’s seemingly inconsequential actions can have a sensational or devastating effect.

Research voraciously

For alternate history to work, it needs to be convincing. Even though you can’t actually travel to an alternate reality and see how things turn out for yourself, you need to be able to bring your story world to life for your reader. This means learning everything you can about the singular event you’ve chosen to change, as well as the time period it occurred in and the real-world ramifications of the event. How would everyday culture be affected? What about staples like food and clothing? For example, both food (especially meat) and fabrics were heavily rationed during World War II. If the war had turned out differently, would the restrictions have continued longer? Would they still be in effect today? How would people have adapted to new regulations and laws? In order for you to create an informed and authentic world (more on that below), you’ll need to develop a solid understanding of its foundations in real historical fact. In other words: first learn the rules, then break them.

Determine your protagonist

No matter how experimental our narratives become, all good stories are about one thing: people. Characters thrown into challenging circumstances and surviving as best they can with what they’ve been given. An interesting world is only as interesting as its central character. Decide which figure, out of the countless possibilities in this timeline, you want to explore. Then, all your usual character development work applies: What does this person want? What do they need? What’s standing in their way? What matters to them most in the world? Etc, etc. The core themes and messages you’re trying to communicate through your alternate history story will only resonate with the reader if you convey them through a human lens. That’s why your story needs a compelling character.

Build your story world

It’s time to develop your setting. You’ve done the research — now you get to give it your own spin. Consider things like the development of machinery and technology; travel and land borders; gender, race, and social structures; the use of media, medicine, and so forth. How would these things be different as a result of your historical catalyst? It can be helpful to brainstorm your worldbuilding through a mind map technique. For each stage in your world’s development, write down all of the different effects that would come out of it and where each of these effects would lead. Once you have the structure of your alternate world in place, you can start moving your characters around in it. This is where you find the plot.

Don’t neglect the narrative arc

You may have a fantastic idea for an alternate history novel, but remember: an idea is not a story. You still need to make space for all your usual suspects: the inciting incident, the midpoint, the climax, the central conflict, a dynamic character arc. When your story reaches its inevitable conclusion, you need to decide if this world begins to shift back towards the one we know, or diverges even further away. Do the events of the story lead the characters to the sorts of choices that were made in our reality? Or do the characters deviate even further down their respective paths? How you plan out your story is up to you. Some writers like to meticulously outline their stories in advance; others like to discover what happens as they go. Your writing process can be as structured or as organic as you like. Now, go forth and explore the unknown.

Fija Callaghan is an author, poet, and a content editor with The History Quill. She is also The History Quill’s community manager. Her work has been shortlisted and longlisted for a number of short story prizes, and you can find her writing in publications like Gingerbread House, Crow & Cross Keys, Corvid Queen, and Mythic Magazine. When not writing or helping other writers get the best out of their work, she can be found haunting her local bookshops or watching the tide come in.

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So, you want to write historical fiction. You’re fascinated by history. You read a lot about history. You watch a lot of documentaries and movies about history. You listen to podcasts about history. You LOVE history. And you want to tell stories about people in historical settings. You know you’re going to need to research, of course. You’ll be reading and talking to people and going places, probably. But what about getting your hands dirty? That’s right, research isn’t just about burying yourself in paper. You need to immerse yourself in your subject. So, how are you going to go about this?

Read, listen, watch

Probably lots of reading, to begin with. Some broad reading about the period, some more specific stuff on the areas of society your story covers, such as aircraft or chemistry or veterinarians, or whatever. There will most likely be some choice finds on Amazon marketplace of the most niche of niche books, my personal favourite being a find I needed on a novel about Victorian brickmaking, titled The Cry of the Children from the Brickyards of England: And How the Cry Has Been Heard, with Observations Upon the Carrying Out of the Act. How the soul sings when you find something so precisely needed! You might visit the town archives or the Imperial War Museum Reading Room to look at unpublished letters from the Boer War, or diary entries from the Blitz.

So, you’ve done your reading. You’ll probably complement that with some savvy Googling – whether that be a Google search, Google Books or Google Scholar – and you’ll most likely save a bunch of articles and images on topics you need, like Victorian schoolrooms or Georgian era chandlers. Maybe you’ll be lucky and there’s some juicy BBC documentaries on your chosen topic, like shopgirls in the 1890s. Or a history podcast that has a brilliant series on the exact event you’re researching, such as the Warsaw Ghetto Revolt moment by moment. This is all great stuff. You need all that stuff. You can write some super prose based on all those acorns of material, that will grow into mighty oaks of fiction based on reliable facts. But…is that it? Without a time machine, one might think that’s all there is to do. But there’s more…

Talk to me

We’d all love a time machine (as long as I still have WiFi) but the next best thing might well be talking to people who were there. So if you’re writing about anything within the twentieth century, it’s possible to talk to people who experienced those events at the time. Or possibly earlier, if they can talk knowledgeably about their parents or grandparents’ experiences as well. I found a WW2 Wren in her nineties who still had perfect recall of her days as a secret listener – a wireless telegraphist – during the war and I was lucky enough to interview her over the phone.

That kind of personal detail was invaluable in making my characters feel real, such as the fact that they sneakily wore men’s navy blue bellbottoms instead of the standard issue skirt on the nightshifts, as everything was more relaxed at night. Little gems like that are the kind of thing you’ll not always find in a standard account of what wireless telegraphists did. So, if you can, seek out people who were there, who lived through it, who can give you these tiny details that only a true witness can give.

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Location, location, location

You might be writing about your home town in northern England, or about Vanuatu in the south-western Pacific. Either way, you’ll do yourself a world of good by visiting the locations you’re writing about, if have the time and resources. It might be an eighteenth-century town house in York, that still retains the original wood-panelling in the drawing room. Or it could be the dining table at Howarth Parsonage where Emily Brontë wrote Wuthering Heights.

In my own experience, standing on the iron bridge at Ironbridge in Shropshire, gazing at the river Severn flow beneath my feet, that gave me the inspiration for a saga based on the poor folk living along its banks and the rich folks in their posh houses up on the hill, literally looking down on their minions who created the industrial revolution with the sweat off their backs. Standing in the actual place where real things happened, things you want to write about, can give you history shivers, that phenomenon where you can physically feel the atmosphere of a place vibrate with history.

In other cases, it may be that you notice a detail you’d never have seen in a photograph. I wrote about a Victorian hop farm, and decided to travel several hours to visit a hop farming museum in Kent. I went for a quiet, slow walk alone along the hop lanes, reached out and touched one of the hop bines. I found that the stalks were sticky and the new growth was soft as eyelashes. I’d never have found that golden nugget of information if I hadn’t travelled there and touched the hop plants myself.

Doing the thing

Last but not least is the most immersive of research techniques and that is to do the thing you’re writing about. So you can’t be a civil war soldier…but maybe you could take part in a reenactment. You’re no seamstress, but perhaps you can go to a sewing club, interview the people who regularly go, hang out with them and listen to the gossip, and have a go at sewing something yourself. In my case, I visited an artisan brickmaker and learnt how to make bricks by hand, then imagined doing the same thing thousands of times a day, as my characters would have had to do for little pay and with no breaks.

I once wrote about early pilots, from Edwardian England through to WW1. A pilot I interviewed told me I had no business writing about vintage flying if I hadn’t been up in a light aircraft. As I was cowardly about flying, I ignored this for a year, until he finally persuaded me to go. I went up with him in a Cessna, and then in a Pitts Special (all donated free, very generously). I’d had no idea about the initial terror of light aircraft flying, which soon gave way to exhilaration at the danger, then joy at the godlike view. When I got home, I rewrote all of my flying scenes, because I knew they were all wrong.

We may not have time machines available to us as historical novelists, but with a bit of effort, we can make our own.

Rebecca Mascull is an historical novelist, who writes litfic under her own name and saga fiction as Mollie Walton. During lockdown, she found out she was funny, so she writes romcoms as Harper Ford too. You can find all of her many websites and socials under this one handy link.

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Social media can be a powerful and positive tool for authors, but it can also be a minefield to navigate. What should we post? On which platforms? How often? And so on.

For historical fiction authors, social media works best when we acknowledge two fundamental concepts:

1. Using social media won’t guarantee a best-selling book. This may be hard for authors to swallow, but it also takes the pressure off. Book sales are not wholly dependent on how active you are online, although some presence on social media can help.

2. It is best if authors focus on connecting with others via social media, rather than simply using it as a promotional tool. Career-wise, historical fiction authors should concentrate on building relationships with fellow writers and readers, book reviewers and bloggers, beta readers and critique partners, literary festival organisers and so on. If authors only bang on about their own books all the time, this will get them nowhere.

So, what effective social media strategies can historical fiction authors use?

A key piece of advice is to concentrate on your favourite platform, rather than try and cover all of them. The main social media platforms are:

Facebook

Traditionally, this has been the best place for connecting with historical fiction readers and writers. You can set up an Author page, separate from your personal page. Good Facebook groups for historical fiction include: Historical Novel Society, Historical Writers Association, Historical Fiction Booklovers (BookBub)

X (formerly Twitter)

This remains a powerful platform for authors of historical fiction. You can connect with other #HistFic writers, as well as book bloggers and reviewers, publishers, agents, editors, book shops and so on. 

Some authors are also exploring alternatives, like Threads, Instagram’s answer to X, and BlueSky. You may wish to consider claiming handles on some of these, even if you don’t intend to use them much.

Instagram

This is increasingly popular with historical fiction writers, and is a strong platform for showcasing books. Bookstagrammers are crucial players in the literary marketing landscape, but be wary of people charging for reviews, or promising to feature your book on their social media channel in return for a payment. Do your homework, and if you are prepared to pay for reviews etc, then make sure you can trust that the bookstagrammer will honour their promises.

BookTok (TikTok)

Whilst this has in the past been considered a young person’s platform, that’s not the case anymore. People of all ages are discovering the powerful pull of TikTok, and many historical fiction authors, such as Jean Menzies and Jessica Bull to name only two, have claimed a space here. However, if you don’t enjoy making short form videos you would be wise to give this platform a miss. 

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20 tips for whatever channel you choose

1. There is no hard and fast rule for how often you should post on social media, but a good rule of thumb is to do it whenever you have something interesting or relevant to share. That might mean you post something several times a day, or only once a month. Be authentic, and regular if you can.

2. Post a glimpse into your author life: such as author talks you take part in, book events you attend, or research trips you take.

3. Give an update on your writing progress: readers enjoy a glimpse behind the scenes of the publishing process. Post about your struggles (writers’ block, anyone?) and successes (finishing a tricky section, resolving a research conundrum) that you encounter on your journey.

3. Show your workspace: Virginia Woolf invented the standing desk. Lord Byron wrote in a haunted house. Charles Dickens was a neat freak. Truman Capote always wrote with a glass of Sherry next to him. Where do you write?

4. Share your writing tips and tools: perhaps you have a huge whiteboard covered in post it notes? Maybe you use specific research methods, writing software, or approaches like dictation.

5. Share what you’re reading, especially any historical fiction, and in the process support your fellow authors. Maybe they will notice and reciprocate, maybe not. But either way, it shows the world you read and love historical fiction.

6. Share a quote from one of your books: use tools like Canva to create eye-catching images of quotes, to inspire, intrigue, or tease readers into wanting to read more.

7. Show off a relevant talent or hobby: are you a member of a reenactment society? Can you grow medicinal herbs, and know how to use them? Do you write with a quill? Post about it.

8. Share the things that inspire your writing process: Have you been inspired by real people in history? Post photographs of them if you can, but be cautious of copyright. Create a Pinterest board of historic settings/buildings/locations that inspire you.

9. Use objects or props from your books: Share interesting items that appear in your stories. Does your character use tarot cards? Or a Mark III B2 wireless set, like my SOE secret agent Elisabeth does? Or does your character wear unusual clothing?

10. Discuss your love of history: sharing your passion for all things historical can help readers relate to you, and foster engagement in your books. You could also share articles you’ve read on areas of history that interest you.

11. Promote historical charities or societies: Do you belong to a Historical Society or group? For example, The Historical Association – the UK national charity of history.
12. Share interesting historical links and media: your followers will likely be interested in the historical topics you explore in your books, so if you find a photo, article, website or video interesting, share it with them.

13. Give a glimpse of your private life, but only if you want. Feel free to ignore this tip. Many authors do share personal posts, for instance if they’ve visited somewhere interesting on holiday, or have discovered a favourite recipe, or if they’ve enjoyed a museum exhibit.

14. Post a book cover reveal: social media is the perfect place to show readers what your next book will look like. Always credit the designer/illustrator, and if you have a publisher check that it’s OK to do this.

15. Post an unboxing video: the moment an author receives their advanced reader copies (ARCs), or final print books in the post, is a moment to be celebrated. Make a video and post it online.

16. Publicise a preorder campaign: this is great for building buzz around a new book, and a good way to engage with readers too. Authors can run giveaways and competitions, in the run up to publishing their books, although make sure you familiarise yourselves with any relevant rules around competitions in your country.

17. Invite people to your book events: if you are taking part in a festival, or a book tour, a blog tour, a book signing, or an author talk, let people know about it, and where they can get tickets. An author website can help with lists of events, but social media is great for promoting each individual event.

18. Share good news: has your novel become a bestseller? Won a prize? Have you landed an agent or a publishing deal? Shout it on social media. X and TikTok can be the best platforms for immediate, unfiltered reactions to good news events.

20. Show off your pets: if you can’t think of anything to post, snap a picture of your pet with your book!

Social media isn’t everything though

In conclusion, social media can be an effective and influential component in an author’s marketing arsenal, but it must be remembered that social media is constantly changing. Because of its sometimes transient nature, and the fact that your content does not ultimately belong to you but to the company behind the social media platform, it isn’t the only marketing you should be doing. For long term career growth, authors are advised to have a website and build a newsletter e-mail list. This doesn’t mean you have to produce a monthly newsletter, but it’s a great way to showcase big news, tell people about a new book, or just to keep in touch with fellow historical fiction fans.

And lastly, it is worth noting that not all agents and publishers expect an author to have a large, or indeed any, audience on social media.

Louise Morrish is an author and librarian from Hampshire. Her debut novel, ‘Operation Moonlight’, won the Penguin Random House First Novel competition, and was published in 2022. Her next historical novel, ‘Women of War’, will be published by Penguin in September 2024. You can find Louise at www.louisemorrish.com
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So you’ve made it over the first hurdle — writing the book. You’ve poured your life’s blood into a magnum opus so breathtaking that the Booker Prize committee will be beating down your door. But first! You have to get it published.

There are a few ways you can get a finished book out into the world, including self publishing, submitting to an independent publisher, or submitting to a literary agent. But to convince someone else to champion your book on your behalf, you’ll first need to entice them with a stellar query letter.

It’s heartbreaking to see so many amazing manuscripts get rejected because of simple, easy query letter mistakes. To avoid inadvertently sabotaging your submission, be sure to watch out for these snafus.

Submitting your manuscript before it’s ready

The number one biggest mistake new writers make when submitting to an agent or publisher is sending out their finished manuscript too soon.

Fact: when we complete a piece of writing, our brains reward us with a rush of dopamine. This gives us a bit of a creative high which, for a very brief moment, makes us believe the mess in front of us is the greatest thing we’ve ever done (this is right before the “editor brain” sets in and makes us second-guess all of our life choices). For this reason, new writers will often ride this high and hit “send” on a rough draft.

Before submitting your work, make sure you’ve had another pair of eyes on your story (either through peer feedback, or a professional editor), and polished it to a pristine shine.

Sending a generic query letter

Agents and publishers receive hundreds of queries every week (some receive hundreds every day!). If you open your query letter with “Dear Sirs” and send it to an entirely female workplace, your chances are going to be tossed in the bin faster than you can say “institutionalised misogyny”.

Likewise, don’t open your query letter with “To whom it may concern”, or worse, “Dear [NAME]” (this really happened!). Instead, address the recipient specifically and pinpoint a reason why you chose to reach out to them: “because you represent one of my favourite authors”, “because I saw you speak at The History Quill convention”, “because you mentioned on Manuscript Wish List that you grew up reading my all-time favourite formative book series…”. Anything you can do to make a real human connection will work in your favour.

Not following submission guidelines

Neither agents nor publishers are a one-size-fits-all operation. Some will ask for the first ten pages and a query letter. Others will ask for a query letter and a synopsis. Some want the full manuscript right up front, and a query letter, and a synopsis, and a marketing plan. (Pro tip: the first ten pages means the first ten pages, not your favourite scene from Chapter Twelve). If you send more or less than is initially requested, you’ll show the person on the other side one of two things: either you can’t be trusted to follow instructions, or you believe that the instructions don’t apply to you. Neither presents you in the best light as someone to build a professional relationship with.

Not reviewing what’s already been accepted

It’s always helpful to review what’s already been published to get a sense of whether your work is a good fit. Whether it’s an independent publisher, a literary agent, or even a magazine, they’ll want to take on writers who fit into their overall aesthetic and brand. Keep in mind, this is for you as much as it is for them. If you send your historical bodice ripper to a publisher that only works with epic sci-fi, your book probably won’t get accepted — and the publisher also won’t know how to market romance or how to reach romance readers. By targeting agents and publishers who represent the kind of thing you like to write, you’ll ensure you’re working with someone who can give you the best possible start to your career.

Forgetting to include key information

When querying, make sure you hit all your bases: name, contact information (these people will often print out manuscripts to read them, so they won’t necessarily be able to see the email address it was sent from), genre, word count, comparable titles, target audience. If you miss any of these key details, your submission may be discarded.

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Being too arrogant

“BREAKING: I’m offering you the once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to represent the next big name in historical fiction. To be considered, please respond with your offer within three days. I’ve sent this message out to a select lucky few, so don’t delay! If you pass me up, you’ll be kicking yourself for it later.” While a certain amount of confidence does help you make your way in the cold, hard world, sliding into arrogance can make you look like you’d be a difficult person to work with (as well as someone who doesn’t understand the publishing industry). It can be helpful to think of finding an agent a bit like entering the shark waters of dating — would you want to go out to dinner with someone who thought saying hello to you meant you had won the social lottery? Didn’t think so.

Not being arrogant enough

At the same time, resist the urge to talk yourself down. It’s not uncommon for writers to write query letters that say things like, “Would you perhaps be willing to take a chance on my humble work?” It can sometimes feel like we’re expected to respond to whatever scraps of validation are thrown our way with effusive gratitude. Remember — just like being on a date, you have something to offer too! The goal isn’t to find someone who will deign to work with you, but someone you’ll mutually connect with.

Getting too intimate

While you may become close friends with your agent or publisher a little further down the road, at this stage you’re embarking on a business relationship. This means treating them with professional respect and a workplace-appropriate emotional distance. If some challenge in your life has directly influenced the work you’re pitching, you can touch on that briefly: “This novel was inspired by my struggle with substance abuse / a chronic illness / losing a loved one”. However, refrain from spilling your rivers of woe in order to elicit an emotional response. The emotional response should come from the story.

Trying to hack the system

True story: Once upon a time, a literary agent went to a writer’s convention filled with hopeful aspiring authors. She excused herself to go to the bathroom, and while in the bathroom, someone pushed their manuscript underneath the stall door. Don’t be that writer. Sometimes new writers try to get around the usual tracks by reaching out to agents or publishers through personal social media, LinkedIn, or even their private email addresses. Respect boundaries and submission guidelines so that you don’t become “You’ll never believe, this one time…”

Submitting to only one agent at a time

Querying is a long road. You’ve already spent however many years writing the book — now you have to send it out and wait for a response, which may take months or may never show up at all. If you send your manuscript to only one agent… wait… another one… wait… an indie publisher… wait… you’ll be in the grave before you’re on the shelves. A good rule of thumb is to send your manuscript out to your top five picks and wait to hear back. Then, start sending it out to 10-15 venues at a time, making adjustments based on any feedback you receive. It may take time, but you’ll find the right home for your book! Ready to take on the query trenches? Go get that book deal!

Fija Callaghan is an author, poet, and a content editor with The History Quill. She is also The History Quill’s community manager. Her work has been shortlisted and longlisted for a number of short story prizes, and you can find her writing in publications like Gingerbread House, Crow & Cross Keys, Corvid Queen, and Mythic Magazine. When not writing or helping other writers get the best out of their work, she can be found haunting her local bookshops or watching the tide come in.

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Seeing double: What if the untold story you’re writing gets told by someone else? https://thehistoryquill.com/seeing-double-what-if-the-untold-story-youre-writing-gets-told-by-someone-else/ Tue, 03 Sep 2024 14:45:09 +0000 https://thehistoryquill.com/?p=65967 The post Seeing double: What if the untold story you’re writing gets told by someone else? appeared first on The History Quill.

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Picture the scene: you’ve spent years working on your novel about a historical figure never immortalised in fiction. And then you discover someone else is publishing a novel about them.

This situation is unique to historical fiction writers: when we fictionalise real historical figures, there’s no guarantee the same person won’t have inspired someone else – perhaps simultaneously. Equally, the urge to re-examine a misunderstood character may have struck someone else too: this year sees two feminist retellings of Medea from Rosie Hewlett and Eilish Quin, while Annie Garthwaite’s Cecily and Anne O’Brien’s The Queen’s Rival came out within twelve months of each other. Depending on where you are in the writing cycle, you might be tempted to ditch your project entirely; if contracts have been signed, you may not have that option. And of course, you might not want to – in which case you’ll need to pitch and market a novel that sounds similar to another writer’s forthcoming book.

How do you keep going?

Discovering another novelist has written about a character you’ve come to view as your own may feel disheartening. But it’s important to recognise that there is no definitive version of a historical figure, even in non-fiction. Your characters are an interpretation of their historical counterparts. CJ Sansom depicts Catherine Parr in Lamentation as an enigmatic, quietly dignified woman, whereas in Philippa Gregory’s The Taming of the Queen Kateryn’s role is less a trigger for a mystery plot, and more a pioneer of early female literature. Meanwhile in Queen’s Gambit Elizabeth Fremantle’s Katherine is vulnerable, surrounded by danger. There’s room in the literary landscape for all these Katherines (and not just because the authors spell their names differently), and perhaps more. What might surprise readers, even those familiar with the period?

Reworking your material

If you decide to shelve your novel, permanently or temporarily, your research doesn’t need to go to waste. Could you tackle the same story from a different angle instead? Given the depth and success of Wolf Hall, it’s going to be harder to pitch a novel centring Thomas Cromwell for a while. But one from his mistress’s perspective? His son’s? His daughter-in-law’s? Those might be very appealing to readers of Wolf Hall.

Practise self-care

Knowing the market is undeniably invaluable, and all good writers are keen readers. But do you really need to be reading that other book – or frantically stalking that other writer on social media? Will the potential toll on your well-being be worth it?

Like many authors, my first novel wasn’t my debut novel: shortly after my book about Arbella Stuart died on submission, Elizabeth Fremantle’s The Girl in the Glass Tower came out. I’m a huge fan of her novels but feared reading her take on Arbella would prove too painful. In the end, I chose to read it – but only once I’d moved on to other projects. My version was largely chronological and first-person – which, given Arbella spends a lot of time alone, was quite restrictive! Fremantle’s, however, used two viewpoint characters and a dual timeline structure to give Arbella’s escape attempts greater prominence, thus enhancing tension throughout. For me, this was a valuable process: looking at other writers’ interpretations of your figures can bring new understanding of your own work’s strengths and weaknesses.

However, with my debut, I’ve taken a different approach. When I started writing The Burnings, there were no novels in print about the North Berwick witch trials; now there are at least three others – Jenni Fagan’s Hex, Danielle Devlin’s Burnt Offerings, and Kate Foster’s The King’s Witches. So far, I’ve avoided reading them – I’m imagining novels so stunning that I lose all faith in my own. At present I’m too emotionally close to my novel: I’d feel vulnerable and paranoid. I’m a firm believer in mood reading, and I’ll be in a much better mood to read The King’s Witches next year, when I’ve moved on to promoting my second novel.

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What makes your novel unique?

When readying your novel for submission or publication, or marketing your work, be mindful of how to pitch it. What genre elements could be played up? Is there a supernatural element, aspects of crime fiction, or a parallel with modern society? For instance, in Rosie Hewlett’s Medea, Jason’s behaviour has clear links to gaslighting, adding poignant resonance for today’s readers. Hypothetically, a novel about Eleanor of Aquitaine might portray her marriage with Henry II in the style of a domestic noir, exploring gender and manipulation: Gone Girl meets Macbeth. Another might take inspiration from Succession, examining her relationships with her many rebellious, rivalrous children. Elevator pitches are crucial for many stages of publishing, from pitching to agents and editors, to booksellers persuading customers to buy your book. Thoughtful comp titles can distinguish your novel from others about the same figure.

Publishing isn’t a competition!

Appreciating this can be hard, particularly if you’re on the wrong side of the submission process. Other writers’ trajectories may seem ever-ascendent, while your own writing languishes unseen. But for readers, marketing trends translate to lots of books to devour! Cathryn Kemp admits her heart sank on realising Anna Mazzola was also writing about Giulia Tofana, a female poisoner in seventeenth century Rome. However, Kemp says “Penguin weren’t unduly concerned, saying that it wasn’t uncommon for two authors to arrive at the same period in history and write their own versions.” Indeed, A Poisoner’s Tale and The Book of Secrets take contrasting approaches: Kemp says “The legend of Giulia and her circle of female poisoners, witches and occultists became my focus, while Anna’s book centres on the investigation by Stefano Bracchi. As both books have been published, read and reviewed, the similarities feel as if they’ve fallen away as two writers create two very different stories, albeit connected at source.”

Celebrate Other Writers

Above all, do not be tempted to post bitter online comments comparing your books’ merits! It’s important to be a positive voice within the publishing community. You’ll find Jennifer Saint’s endorsements celebrating Costanza Cosati’s Clytemnestra and Claire North’s Ithaca, even though she covered similar ground in Elektra: her generosity is a model to follow. As Cathryn Kemp says, “I believe whole-heartedly there is enough space for all of us writers, debut or established, mid-career or global bestseller. The more voices we raise up and listen to, the better it has to be for publishing as a whole.” I fully agree – having devoured Isabelle Schuler’s Lady Macbethad and Val McDermid’s Queen Macbeth, Ava Reid’s Lady Macbeth is calling out to me more, not less. If retelling old stories in new ways was good enough for Shakespeare, it’s good enough for all of us.

Naomi Kelsey is a guest contributor to The History Quill. Her debut novel, The Burnings, was published by Harper North in 2023. She is the winner of two Northern Writers’ Awards and of the HWA Dorothy Dunnett Competition 2021. Her fiction has been published in Mslexia magazine and shortlisted for several further awards including the Bridport Prize and the Bristol Prize. She posts about books, history, and the chaos of writing around small children and teaching English on Instagram as @naomikelseybooks and on X as @naomikelsey_

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Just as a reminder for everyone who was asleep at school – a primary source is a contemporary object or piece of writing. Stuff from Ye Olden Days of Yore. The Treasurer of the Chamber’s Accounts (Henry VIII’s soft furnishings bill–here if you’re interested) is a superb primary source. As is his foot combat armour at the Royal Armouries in Leeds.

A secondary source, by contrast, is something created after the event. Stuff written down by historians to give their interpretation of events. For example, Henry VIII by Alison Weir is a secondary source. As is the enthusiastic Henry VIII reenactor at Hever Castle on a bank holiday.

This article is geared towards helping you discover some off-the-beaten-path primary sources to aid in your writing. Secondary sources are fantastic veins of information, but without primary sources as part of your research, you restrict your writing to interpretations of the interpretations of others- viewing the past through two misted windows instead of one. Also, by looking at more obscure primary sources you can give your writing something new to help it stand out in a crowded marketplace.

Household Accounts

Like the above example, household accounts give us an insight into what people spent money on. Writing stuff like this down really starts to get trendy in the medieval period, especially from around 1200 CE. Most accounts were kept by the women of the household, dealing with daily expenditures. Although, in bigger estates this was often dealt with by a steward or other high-ranking servant.

For your writing, look beyond people complaining about the price of things. Although having someone comment about the three shillings and threepence spent on King’s maundy gives a nice little detail, it’s much more interesting to write about the bigger purchases.

Look at this extract:

To Ric. Gresham, upon a warrant dated 5 Nov. 20 Hen. VIII., for ten pieces of arras wrought with gold of the story of King David, containing in the whole 743 Flemish ells, at 41s. 8d. an ell; also for 12 pieces of tapestry of the Twelve Months, containing 345 ells Flemish, at 2s. an ell. This stuff was delivered by Gresham to Will. Rugeley, yeoman of the Wardrobe, 27 Oct.

So, Henry VIII has brought some beautiful tapestries. What do your characters think about them? How do them look in the hall?

Look at the wider context. Continuing our example, in October 1528 Henry is sleeping around with his then mistress, future wife Anne Boleyn. Lorenzo Campeggio is at court holding discussions with Henry and Cardinal Wolsey. So, despite everything else that’s going on (including being at war with the Holy Roman Empire!) Henry is still splashing the cash on luxurious furnishing. For your writing, whether your characters are real people or fictional creations, think how they react to these big purchases and how they would impact their day-to-day lives.

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Advertisements

All advertisements play off of desires, fears, or insecurities. Promising something good, or promising to prevent something bad. Advertising isn’t a new thing. By the 17th century, newspapers in London began to carry adverts, and by the 18th century, advertising was really taking off.

Advertising can produce massive shifts in generational attitudes. For example, the legendary diamond marketing campaign by De Beers.

In the 40’s, the New York-based ad agency N.W. Ayer ran some incredible campaigns, showing diamonds as a symbol of eternal love. An up-and-coming copywriter called Frances Gerety came up with the legendary slogan “A diamond is forever”. Previous to this, a diamond ring was neither required nor expected with a proposal. In 1940, 10% of first-time brides had diamond engagement rings. 50 years later in 1990, that number had risen to 80%.

As well as being an interesting anecdote, the De Beers campaign shows just how powerful advertising can be in shaping perceptions and desires. A quick Google will bring up relevant adverts from your story’s period. You can use these to gain a greater insight into what your characters find desirable, or social expectations.

Cook Books

As I mentioned in a previous article What’s Cooking?, food is extremely important in understanding a historical period. The Boke of Cokery by Richard Pynson is the first English cookery book, and it dates from 1500.

Mrs. Beeton’s Book of Household Management, aka Mrs. Beeton’s Cookery Book is another treasure trove of recipes and firsthand insight into the meals that kept families fed and the accounts in the black.

Contemporary recipes are not just useful in helping you avoid blunders- like a 15th-century merchant happily chomping on a tomato before Columbus’ voyages brought them to Europe. Rather they help give an authentic perspective. By looking at actual menus and recipes from your period, you can get a clearer idea about the day-to-day reality your characters live in.

Satire and Cartoons

Satire is as old as humanity. And taking-the-mick is an inherent part of the human condition. Even the rough, tough Vikings had jokes in their sagas. My personal favourites being the adventures of Hali the porridge eater at the court of Harald Hardrada.

These sources can tell us what people in the past found funny, or insulting- or in the case of Hali the porridge eater, and his not-so-gentle-ribbing, both.

The Romans used allegations of sexual misconduct and degenerate behaviour to smear their political enemies. We have tons of primary sources of this (including everything from tablets to graffiti), and it gives us a clear idea of what this society would consider abhorrent or dishonourable in their political elite.

Political cartoons, which take off in the 18th century, give us more of a general overview of feelings at the time. Obviously, there is going to be a bias from that individual cartoonist, but most of them have their finger on the pulse of the nation’s mood at any given time. These little snapshots can tell us how people are feeling and therefore what your character’s reaction might be to macro historical events taking place around them. Or if you’re writing about the great and the good, how they feel about being satirised.

Everyday Objects

A quick trip to the British Museum or the Met will give you access to objects from across the planet and every possible period of time. Or failing that, any number of historic properties, armories or other collections of historical artifacts can give you firsthand experience.

Adding a touch of realism by being able to describe a piece of jewellery, a hair comb, or a dagger accurately is just the surface benefit of looking at (or if you’re extremely lucky, handling!) historical artifacts. The real bonus it gives you as a writer is giving you added empathy, which will come through in your writing as you get ‘in touch’ with your historical period.

Yes, this does sound a bit hippy. But please do trust me. Being able to see say, a 17th-century chair, means you can see your characters sitting there in your mind’s eye while you write a scene. The vibrancy and the colour will shine through in your writing.

Finally, although the temptation is there to rely heavily, or almost exclusively on secondary sources, I would urge you not to. But why reinvent the wheel? I hear you cry. Well, here’s the thing. By utilising primary sources, you build your own connection to the past. You establish your own internal narrative about that point in time, and you grow your empathy for the people who lived there. Also, don’t sell yourself short! Even with the most well-trod paths of history, there is always something new to discover. And you may very well be the one to do it, or at least the first to put it in a novel.

Jack Shannon is a guest contributor to The History Quill. He is the author of Brigandine – a dark, bloody fantasy where unfortunately for Ulf (and everyone else), magic is returning to the land of Ashenfell. It has quite a few sword fights and a healthy dose of Lovecraft. Why not give him a follow on X (Twitter)? @Jack_Shannon

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